American Family Insurance has a page about car insurance. It's the overview page, where people land when they want to learn about coverage and get a quote.
I didn't rebuild it from scratch. It has the same general layout and design.
I just refreshed the copy.
After that, it became the top-performing page on the whole site.
Sessions went up 119.7%. Quote starts went up 59.11%, year over year.
The layout, the design, and the budget all stayed the same. Only the words changed.
Why Companies Jump to a Redesign
When a page isn't working, the first idea is usually a big one.
"Let's redo the whole site."
New layout. New design. New photos. A big budget. Months of work. Meetings about colors and fonts.
It feels like real action. And sometimes a site does need a new look.
But a lot of the time, the design was fine all along. The words were what held it back.
A new design with the same unclear words will still lose people. It will just look nicer while it does.
What's Really Wrong With Most Pages
When I look at a page that isn't working, I usually find the same few problems.
The offer is unclear. A visitor lands on the page and can't tell what you're offering or why they should care. So they leave.
The call to action is weak or buried. The button is hard to find. Or it says something vague. People don't know what to do next, so they do nothing.
The language is too generic. It sounds like every other company in your field. Nothing makes it stand out, so nothing sticks.
The words don't match what people searched for. Someone typed a question into Google. They click on your page. But the page talks about something else, or uses different words. They feel lost, so they hit the back button.
Better copy fixes all four, and the design can stay exactly as it is.
What Changed in the Refresh
I can't share the client's full strategy. But here's what the refresh came down to.
Clearer writing. Easier to read and easier to skim.
A clearer offer. A visitor can tell right away what's on offer and why it matters to them.
A tighter call to action. One clear next step, easy to find.
Less friction. I cut the words that slowed people down or made them think too hard.
Up-to-date keywords. The page now uses the words people actually search for today.
A better headline. To capture what the company offers, so the right people find the page and stay.
AI optimization. Used FAQs and questions in headings that get answered right away to optimize for AI visibility.
That's it. The words got better, and the numbers followed.
Why Copy Is the Best Place to Start
Think about what a full redesign costs. Designers. Developers. Weeks or months of work. A big bill at the end.
Now think about a copy refresh. One writer. A much smaller cost. A much faster turnaround. The page stays live the whole time.
If the words are the problem, a copy refresh fixes the real problem. And if you still want a redesign later, you'll start with words that already work.
That's why copy is the highest-leverage, lowest-cost fix you have. Start there, before anyone touches the design or the code.
Got a Page That Isn't Pulling Its Weight?
This is exactly what I do.
I audit pages that aren't performing and rewrite the copy. You don't need to redesign your whole site to get better results.
Here's how to work with me:
1. See my work. You can see the American Family page and other projects on my Portfolio page.
2. Book a call. Tell me which page isn't working. We'll talk about what's holding it back and whether we're a good fit.
3. I rewrite the copy. You keep your design. Your page starts doing its job.
If you're thinking about a redesign, talk to me first. It might be the words. Book a call here.
Frequently Asked Questions
Do I need a full website redesign? Maybe not. If people visit your page but don't take action, the words are often the problem. Fix the copy first and see what happens.
What is a page refresh? A page refresh means rewriting the words on a page without changing the layout or design. It makes the offer, the message, and the next step clearer.
How do I know if my copy is the problem? Look for these signs: visitors can't tell what you offer, your button is hard to find, your words sound like everyone else's, or your page doesn't match what people searched for.
Is a copy refresh cheaper than a redesign? Yes. It needs one writer, not a team of designers and developers, and it takes much less time.
Can a copy refresh help SEO? Yes. Updating your title, headline, and keywords to match what people search for today can help the right people find your page.
If you want to see the page and more of my work, visit my Portfolio. If you have a page that isn't working, let's talk.
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